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Post by kalas on Aug 18, 2006 18:23:13 GMT -5
marine bios name: kalas family: house of shiza Gender: Male Hair: black Eyes: brown personality: TYPICAL KLIGON. Age: 20 Earth Years (aprox 25 kligon years) Place of birth: kligon prime Date of birth: 3 month of killing 2352 Height: 2 ciptons Weight: 90 joltans Marital Status: Single
carrer info
Rank: warrior of the empirre Uniform: kligon battle aromour, if special guest default red shirt Current Assignment: marine Current Ship: USS Pheonix Commanding Officers: major talran Charges/Reprimands: nothing outstanding and typical kligon brawling Awards: medal of honour in multiple kligon wars.
medical
Blood type: kligon Z+ Allergies: Weaklings Distinguishing features: shiza family ridges Permanent injuries: None that he admits to Permanent scars: numerous Physical Shape: average Physiological Shape: average Last physical: 4 month of hunting, 2375 Physical Result: average
family Father: Shiza (died in action WITH HONOUR) Mother: kalena Shiza (currently serving on kligon prime as lawyer)
life story multiple civil and interstellar wars for the kligon empire. regarded as hero on numerous occasion. typical kligon background.
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Post by Fleet Admiral Kal Dutton on Aug 18, 2006 18:30:12 GMT -5
Just a few mistakes with dates, the first i corrected as your dob, but thsi is 2378 and you have said were on a hunt in 26??? Im lost
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Post by kalas on Aug 18, 2006 18:33:14 GMT -5
woops i just picked 4 random numbers for dates sorry
just fix them to fit in time zone and the hunt wes last physical not when i was hunting
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Post by deepspace8472 on Aug 19, 2006 1:54:13 GMT -5
Hey, you should change all that about Typical stuff.
Example:
Typical Klingon Background
Average Klingon Height
Typical Klingon Personality
This is just a suggestion, but you should give your character some more variety. Lol, you've been a really REALLY great poster so far (56 posts in one DAY?!?) so you should just switch a few things in your bio. Just modify it.
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Post by kalas on Aug 19, 2006 3:06:50 GMT -5
56 in one day? wow never tohught poker was that good.
sorry with typical but thats the feel i want to seem like your everyday kligon. that just happens to weild a batlif and think of andorians as a nice meal (ok so i don't eat andorians but i do weild a batlif)
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