Drake Keil
Strategic Opperations Officer 
Lt Commander, Utility Officer
Posts: 528
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Post by Drake Keil on Sept 10, 2006 19:00:30 GMT -5
what about like an episode about drakes special injury and he comes to find out that his injury wasn't an accident then in the story there is an assassination attempt on him and then all heck breaks loose as the crew trys to figure out who and why they did it. while drake goes into surjury for his bullet. someone uncovers another attempt is gonig to be made on him after his surjury is over and they have to gather the information and stop the assassination before its to late.
let me know what you think.
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Post by deepspace8472 on Sept 10, 2006 19:03:46 GMT -5
Sounds good, Andrew.
Let's just do the Mystery of Keil's Bullet first, because we need to finish that, and then we can do that mission. It would be a great episode.
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Post by Fleet Admiral Kal Dutton on Sept 10, 2006 19:26:54 GMT -5
awersome looks liek we have our first true character plot
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Drake Keil
Strategic Opperations Officer
Lt Commander, Utility Officer
Posts: 528
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Post by Drake Keil on Sept 10, 2006 19:33:13 GMT -5
its covering up another plot its the Maquis that come aboard and try to assassinate him but they also try to take over the ship. the reason they want him dead is because he uncovered a plot to over throw the federation and put themselves in charge. he cought onto it and that is why they shot him.
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Post by tom01313 on Sept 10, 2006 19:34:34 GMT -5
why would they want to kill you?
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Drake Keil
Strategic Opperations Officer
Lt Commander, Utility Officer
Posts: 528
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Post by Drake Keil on Sept 10, 2006 19:35:12 GMT -5
i modifyed it re read it
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Post by Fleet Admiral Kal Dutton on Sept 10, 2006 19:35:14 GMT -5
question: how would killing drake put them incharge and the marquis are disbanded
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Post by Commander J. MacGyver on Sept 10, 2006 21:24:13 GMT -5
its covering up another plot its the Maquis that come aboard and try to assassinate him but they also try to take over the ship. the reason they want him dead is because he uncovered a plot to over throw the federation and put themselves in charge. he cought onto it and that is why they shot him. The Maquis are dead |
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Post by scotty on Sept 11, 2006 6:45:15 GMT -5
in DS9 the marquee sorta gave up they never were fully arrested or killed off so it can still be used
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Drake Keil
Strategic Opperations Officer
Lt Commander, Utility Officer
Posts: 528
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Post by Drake Keil on Sept 11, 2006 13:43:54 GMT -5
i guess i need to be clearer next time i can change it from the Maquis. and karl to anwser your question they want him dead becuase they think he is gonig to come forward to starfleet with this information. but i can change it if you like
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Post by ensignhany on Sept 11, 2006 18:48:22 GMT -5
no i like it cus its when my character realizes she still loves you noo don't change it
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Drake Keil
Strategic Opperations Officer
Lt Commander, Utility Officer
Posts: 528
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Post by Drake Keil on Sept 11, 2006 18:52:18 GMT -5
not upto me you have to run it by karl
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Post by Fleet Admiral Kal Dutton on Sept 14, 2006 18:44:51 GMT -5
Modification talk results:
Since the Maquis cant be doing it and wouldnt want to take over thed feds in the first place this story has been cooked up:
thosands of years ago aliens (possibly the krelak who we could discover to be quiet advanced and using time portals and ships) constructed a giant portal on earth and buried it before they left, thsi wasnt surposed to happen and years later the Soveit Union discover this portal and use it to travel to our time to steal our tecnology and use against the world. But they are seen by a team that our Mr Keil was leading and they had to kill them using their old weapons, but due to it being an old weapon keil was healed thow with seriosu ingury. Now a few years later they come again to finish off the job and now they have plans to overthow us and take the 24th century for themselves.
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Post by tom01313 on Sept 14, 2006 18:50:14 GMT -5
I think its too much like Star Gate SG1
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Post by deepspace8472 on Sept 15, 2006 19:57:06 GMT -5
I agree, Waayyy too much like SG-1. I thought of SG-1 and i barely even watch it.
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