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Post by Rudger Mcvanlen on Mar 31, 2007 17:50:30 GMT -5
Episode 16: New firends, old enemies...
I am wright up more, but a quick over view
The Iconian empire has been crushed by the Tau, but they gave tech to the Drengin witch made them do a three way split The Drengin are now slpit between the semi advanced group of rebels who are escapeing to join the federation, the traditional group following the old ways and the new group that uses the iconian tech to outmatch the other two and to attack the federation...
Meanwhile the Tau have returned from their 80 year retreat and are back, this time to give the Federation a fighting chance against the Krelak and the neo drengin. The class of fates will lead to a great sub plot and link endeavour to Phoenix and phoenic to Ventaur! A great way to keep the phoenic fleet linked and bring in the Tau/drengin=)
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Post by martog on Mar 31, 2007 21:17:06 GMT -5
Oh god, please don't bring these bloody tau and drengin into TNG, for petes sake, they must die in the TOS Movie period, otherwise the timelines aren't sequencial, as in, they were never seen in 'ANY' TNG, DS9 not even a VOY episode, so unless you have a good reason for them to disappear this is a bad idea, no offence
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Post by Rudger Mcvanlen on Apr 1, 2007 0:19:45 GMT -5
no its a great idea..and plus you are always opposed to my ideas...
and i said they went into a retreat... so basicly they went back to doing what they have always done, stay cloaked. and im not ruining the story because it hasint been done yet on Endeavour, by season 2 all will be explained and you will have to once again be quite=P
now go poke someone else=P
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Post by martog on Apr 1, 2007 4:44:19 GMT -5
im not done poking you, are these people like the metrones? or the q? I mean you really have to stretch this out a lil, a race in both the TOS Movie and TNG Movie era that was never once mentioned on either shows, infact any shows, I mean sure, its alright to have a lil bit of this and that for one thing, but for both ships, and I will not be quiet.
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Post by Fleet Admiral Kal Dutton on Apr 1, 2007 9:11:16 GMT -5
I like the Tau, martog you are having your go let him have his
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Post by Rudger Mcvanlen on Apr 1, 2007 13:13:26 GMT -5
thank you captain=)
so how dos everybody else like it?
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Post by martog on Apr 1, 2007 18:41:13 GMT -5
Look, the idea in itself... is alright, but! You must completely explain it to everyone, so we can all be sitting in our chairs thining 'oh! so thats how' knowing every little detail, or maybe you could just outline how the hell it all works, then i'll have no objections.
But as it stands this is way too confusing.
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Post by Rudger Mcvanlen on Apr 1, 2007 19:41:14 GMT -5
Name:Tau General lifetimes:20,000-25,000 earth years. note that they are also nearly imposable to kill. Tech:Most advanced race ever, Advanced slip stream, super weapons the whole deal. Mood:peaceful, benevolent. Best at:Science, and reserch. History:They have never killed each other, and have only fought 3 wars. the first still rages against the Iconian empire. The secend ended quickly and was against the klingons. And the last was also quick but against the romulans. Both of the lateist wars were ended in their favor. Physicle desc:unkown as they live in enviromentle suits and rarely vistit other peoples ships and worlds, their suits carry a built in mini shield and carry a stun weapon, similerly their ships are armed with ion weapons to disable enemy ships, as they would rather stun someone then kill them.
Name:Iconian General lifetimes:10,000-12,000 earth years. Tech:Better then borg but still not as good as the Tau. Mood:Agressive, malevolent. Best at:Conquest, reserch, and spying. History:They have waged many wars, and lost a few, but their ongoing war with the mighty tau is takeing its toll. They are a vile race that will use anything to claw their way up. Physicle desc:between 6'2" and 7'8", pale/blue-pale/purple skined, weighing between 120-180 pounds.
Name:Drengin General lifetimes:70-90 earth years Tech:Roughly 50 years younger then the Federation Mood:Agressive, warlike Best at:War, raiding, bordeing History:They are a strange unreasonable people. Tell them you mean no harm and they will see it as some kind of ploy. and attack. They have no consept of surrender or retreat, the words areint even in their laungauge. They also use swarm tactics, and if you dont have a gun they will gladly put theirs away and fight you in hand to hand combat. Also they have no fear, of anything. Even if they know theres no way to kill their enemy they will still attack him. They put no price on life, if their swarm tactics dont work... they wont care. They fight how they fight and never change. They also refuse to admit help from anyone of another race, and if they are dieing and you offer to help, they will still try to kill you.
They also have a strange way of fighting in space, they can match a shields output and those they could fire right through your shields, yet they don't. Instead they board you, and dont care how many it takes to get the job done. They seem to have no consept of ambushing, or being sneaky. They simply charge headlong at you, and expect you to meet them in "Glorious death". They say that to "Die is to fulfill your duty to the great lord of death" and to "Honor those who came before by joining them with a blade in your gut". Physicle desc:5' 8" - 6' 2" feet high when standing. Red skined, kinda scaily, but they have beards that wrap around their heads, from chin back up above their ears to meet again on the back of their head. They are very muscuelar and roughly match a klingon in strength.
these are the traditional drengin, the other two groups look the same but act as i discribed in the intro thingy.
dos that help?
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Post by palmer on Apr 3, 2007 21:39:08 GMT -5
Yes, a little, but I must say that the Iconian empire sounds way cooler than the Tau, we should fight with the Iconians to help them wipe out these very dangerou Tau.
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Post by Rudger Mcvanlen on Apr 5, 2007 2:26:21 GMT -5
lol, the Iconians are evil, and even more advanced then any threat the federation has ever faced, plus their almost destroyed. And the Tau are no threat to anyone, they are going to help the federation fight the Krelak, and the Neo drengin. Plus they can now give us stuff since this is after the main story of star trek this can go where ever we want=P
and why would you ally with the evil guys who are more likely to stab you in the back and steal your ship then the guys who are like "Hey want this sweet ion cannon, cool you can have it. So you say the krelak are killing you? ok" *Smites krelak* "happy?" lol
so it wouldint happen like that but the Tau are the goodguys, not the Iconians.
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Post by Commander J. MacGyver on Apr 5, 2007 17:15:56 GMT -5
Arent the Iconians the halfblack half white?
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Post by Rudger Mcvanlen on Apr 5, 2007 18:26:59 GMT -5
wrong iconians. these are my Iconians.
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Post by palmer on Apr 6, 2007 6:21:07 GMT -5
oh right, I can entirely see the different way of saying it, must have a soft I.
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Post by Commander J. MacGyver on Apr 8, 2007 9:37:33 GMT -5
Whats ther diff? ther Blue and Red? lol ppl could get confused you should change ther name.
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Post by Rudger Mcvanlen on Apr 8, 2007 13:58:42 GMT -5
dude... did you even read the discription of their race? anyone who dos will know instantly that they are evil and compleatly diferint Iconians.
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